2003-07-26 - 9:22 a.m.
isn't it ridiculous?
you were so meticulous
and yet, just like that Roseanne Barr
too many artists in the studio marr
the final product (looks too bizarre)
and we're left wondering who you are
so instead of a ribbon you're awarded a star
in a 5 point system (which merits by far
a whole lot less than you're worth, my dear
are you listening to me? do I make myself clear?
I said integration and you cried mutiny
because your vessel's congregation's ruled by self tyranny
and now all that's left of the captains' log to read
is disjointed effort writings of the air and land and sea
so the cast and crew have morphed into some clones which try to breathe
new life into a story which remains a mystery
as it stands amidst the rabble which so wants validity
so they clamour and they babble but they lack viscousity
no they breakdown under pressure and the parts begin to seize
which won't warrant my departure -- I remain where I can please
for though you may look back and say, "You see? I'm such a tease!
And if he hollers let him go to AMPs and wannabes"
but I don't judge by intellect nor such artistic merit
but by the rule that's golden, "if they got it do they share it?"
is the general composition something beautiful to see?
something transient to beholders, something full of imagery,
something borne upon the shoulders of originality?
appealing to the eye, yes, but also so much more
"I know it when I see it," says the one who keeps the score
it isn't only genius mixed with signs of perspiration
it's implosion and it's seen as an explosive integration
so don't believe all that you read as you consult the log
you can't pass for authentic random entry, scurvey dog!
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